3/5
I respect the theme here, but I don't have any clue as to what you used to compose this. I tried to imagine a full scale band play this. I like the flute and trumpet runs. I think the percussion needs something a bit more impressive than simple rolls and paradiddles. The front ensemble (if you have one) could use a bigger part. I think if you threw some of that in there, you could really make this work!
Good job!